Choice Register
Illustrative, for a fictional construction management product called Meridian. Every statement in the draft, quoted as written, tested on one question: did somebody argue for the opposite.
| Statement as drafted | Rejected alternative | Advocated by | Switch trigger | Verdict |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| We will win with the general contractor as our primary buyer | Subcontractor-first, reaching the GC through the trades | VP Sales | >1/3 new ARR non-GC, 2 quarters | Choice |
| We will be the system of record for project financials | Field execution first, financials stay in the ERP | Head of Product | Financial data arrives via a rival's integration | Choice |
| We will enter Canada and the UK in fiscal 2027 | Deepen the US Southeast, 38% win rate vs 22% | CRO | Southeast win rate below 30% | Choice |
| We will deliver an exceptional user experience | none exists | nobody | - | Description |
| We will invest in AI to accelerate customer workflows | none as written | nobody | - | Description |
| We will build an open platform with a robust API and a partner ecosystem | closed, fewer but deeper integrations | nobody | - | Description |
| We will maintain best-in-class security and compliance | none exists | nobody | - | Description |
| We will focus on mid-market firms of 50 to 500 employees | enterprise, or the long tail | nobody this cycle | - | Description |
| We will continue to serve our existing customers with excellence | none exists | nobody | - | Delete |
| We will be mobile-first for field users | desk-first for the office roles who sign | nobody explicitly | - | Contradicts financials |
| We will grow through a product-led self-serve motion | sales-led, committee, security review | nobody this cycle | - | Contradicts GC buyer |
Three choices, eight descriptions. Report the ratio before critiquing any single line, because it is arithmetic rather than taste. The descriptions are not badly written: they are usually the best-written lines in the draft, which is what a sentence with nothing contested in it reads like. They get reclassified rather than deleted, three to operating principles, three to initiatives, two gone. The two contradictions are decisions waiting to happen: a 90-day committee evaluation is not a self-serve motion, and the accountant reading budget-to-actual on two monitors is not a mobile-first user.